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Dark angel

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На английском (может и не очень грамотно, зато от души)

I hear the voice.
Under the sky.
I see the indigo sun.

Give me your chroice.
My fantom sign.
Always to sunrise you run.

refrain------------------------------

You have stolen my mind!
But i remember this nights!
Every time like first time!
You can't change the past!

Morning it's come!
Indigo sun it's raising!
I have payed my pricing!
I was burned tonight!

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Was it a dream?
Or just a mist?
Memories don't answer nice.

But not forgot.
Those shining tears.
From stars in heavenly eyes.

refrain
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You came again.
My evening doom.
Raising with morning and fly.

But under couch.
In my small room.
Two snow-white feathers still lie.

I don't try find.
Where is your soul.
I don't belive in your dome.

But every time.
When night is fall.
My falling angel will come...

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А может лучше подстрочный первод добавить? :)

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Вполне ничего и без подстрочного перевода.